Blog 9- Presentation Review

Identify five things you could do better with your seven-minute presentation.
*Macro/Micro scaled issue and discuss this more directly
*Stick to the rubric outline
*Integrate definitions into the presentation instead of presenting in a specific slide
*Specify how we will get people to use the app or take the survey
*Incorporate logic model that shows each step of the progress
*More information on our research
*Making a mock-dashboard for our app

Did you respond to the referees’ questions in a concise and precise manner? Describe five responses you could have approached differently.
*What is the first group of audience we want to focus on and target?
Everyone in Almaty is an important audience to focus on. However, the first group of audience would be teens/young adults, which is the population most accessible to smartphones or computers. They are also constantly exposed to outdoor air pollution and vulnerable because they are not yet independent.

*How are people using the other apps? How often/where are the other apps being utilized?
Gather more information and insight on popularity of the other apps

*How will we get people to start using the app?
Give specific examples of influencers, companies and NGOS we will/ have talked to.

*How will we make our app in line with the culture of the Almaty people; are cigarettes appropriate?
We should probably do more research on what would be appropriate before we commit to using cigarettes as a way of presenting the pollution.

*Have we informed the local government about environmental policy making?
Through the app we can make recommendations for possible paths the government can go down in the future. We might also state plans to talk to the government about policy once we have a following and credibility.

Identify five techniques / strategies (content, design, answering questions, etc) that other teams did particularly well…that you could adopt for your own team.
*Referring to other team members to answer questions
*Following the order of the rating rubric outline
*Improved design/order of our presentation slides
*Spoke clearly and slowly
*Specify and detail our approach for our solution

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