Your overall outline looks good. For the final presentation I would add specific compelling statistics to your slides on the problem. Also add some more detail to the “results of our research” section – what quantity of mushrooms can you produce? How much would a farmer produce, and how often, and how much would those mushrooms sell for? Anywhere you can add details that support/prove what you are saying and still remain within your time limit I would.
Your overall outline looks good. For the final presentation I would add specific compelling statistics to your slides on the problem. Also add some more detail to the “results of our research” section – what quantity of mushrooms can you produce? How much would a farmer produce, and how often, and how much would those mushrooms sell for? Anywhere you can add details that support/prove what you are saying and still remain within your time limit I would.