My first feedback from Ms. Mary Newbegin was really helpful, and I managed to work on some of my feedback.
Summary
The Museum of Modern Art.
I went to MoMA during the pacing break. The museum was full of people, and their eyes were full of happiness because of the variety of arts. I didn’t understand most of the art there. I will share with youRead more…
My goals
This is my second goal for Dr. murphy’s class. It is really nice to write your goals and think about them more because most of the successful people set a goal to achieve before doing it and that is reallyRead more…
Peer editing
It was my pleasure to get some feedback from my friends. The feedback was really helpful to improve some of my essays and to include more transitions and to avoid some Run-ons.
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