This is the first paper I wrote in the StepUp class. In this paper, I try to use the skills I learned from the class, like summary and how to design a paper. However, this paper is not good, I did not include a thesis sentence and the body part was not well designed. There are still a lot of things I need to improve and work on it. I need to work harder on my writing.
I’ll post my final draft here later, I hope it can show my improvement in my writing.