I appreciate Dr. Murphy’s first Feedback it was really helpful and full of Good advises. I managed to fix some of the Feedback that was given to me.
SMART GOALS
Smart goals is a way to find out what goals do you want to achieve, and it must be realistic and has a deadline to make us focus on the goal more. I always do this when I feel thatRead more…
Identify prepositional phrases
We had an interesting lesson about prepositions and preposition phrases. It was a an easy sessions but it taught us a lot about prepositions. The first thing to identify preposition phrase is to look for the preposition, and that willRead more…
My goals
This is my second goal for Dr. murphy’s class. It is really nice to write your goals and think about them more because most of the successful people set a goal to achieve before doing it and that is reallyRead more…
Peer editing
It was my pleasure to get some feedback from my friends. The feedback was really helpful to improve some of my essays and to include more transitions and to avoid some Run-ons.
Peer Review
We had an interesting session in Dr.Murphy’s class about peer review and it was really helpful; it taught me a lot of things in grammar that I did not recognize.For example, I had some run-ons that I did not realizeRead more…