In this poem, I wrote it by myself, with some advice from Mrs. Landers. It’s not bad, at least I wrote a poem! I never thought that I would write a poem, especially in English! First, it was hard for me to make it have the same rhythm, and that can fit also, but I really enjoy it. This was a homework from Mrs. Teresa, but I didn’t do it as a homework, I did it for myself, to show myself that I can do it. I really like it, so I think it’s cool to share.
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It is very cool to share! I have heard of oud; I’d like to try it sometime, but it’s hard to find in the US.
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Great poem!